4 stars
Thanks to Netgalley and Victory Editing NetGalley Co-op for providing the e-ARC. Views are my own
Tropes: other-world, elves, magic, literal-enemies, MFC is a softie, magical garden, powerful MFC, powerful MMC.
Aella is a powerful, magical elf and an orphan. She's 33 but still under the protection of her uncle, a sadistic elf who's leading the war against other elves. The story revolves around the war between the elves and their world slowly dying unless they find an artefact that gives life to their planet. This is book one.
1. The book took me a long time to read despite not being more than 400 pages long. I think it's because the author made a decent effort to make it action packed.
2. Good world building. I was not too invested in other magical creatures which don't play a role in the story. Wisps, centaurs... it didn't matter to me if they didn't move the plot in some way. I sort of skipped those paragraphs.
3. The story is intriguing. MFC who is under the control of her uncle by being cursed, she falls unconscious any time she leaves his territory. MFC who is cursed by not being able to fall in love.
4. The author allowed a world that allows both male and female elves to express themselves sexually without being judged. The rules are the same for both.
BUT
1. Despite a lot of action, I feel like the book could have been condensed. The number of times Aella went on portal trips but then nothing happened, could have been cut down.
2. The extra magical creatures didn't contribute much to the storyline. I think they could have been cut.
3. I kept thinking that according to the story, the MMC can't fall in love with the MFC, but then he was possessive of her, cared for her, craved her, listened to her limitations and followed them, allowed her liberty of his body, was gentle with her, missed her and lusted after her. What is love, if not this. I don't know what the author defines love as, but this is it.
4. Supposedly, the MFC could roam around wherever in the enemy kingdom without going unconscious so that really confused me.
I'll be anxiously waiting for the next installment when they try to reach earth.